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Damon Ortiz
10-11-2009, 10:29 PM
feedback link -
http://www.hiphopnetwork.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1135


http://www.zshare.net/audio/668202310b0c4096/


some real life shiz yaddiggag

TheBlackEyeCEO
10-11-2009, 11:20 PM
loving this beat, this is some of the realest shit you ever wrote for sure, mic presence and emotion is perfect throughout, builds perfectly matching the beat, definitely one of my favorites you've ever done, keep it up man

Damon Ortiz
10-12-2009, 10:06 PM
good looks

Emakulit
10-15-2009, 06:17 PM
i want this fucking beat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
feeling this shit man....production neeeds a lil work....but ur rhyme scheme is nasty!!!...
hit me up for a collab



p.s. who made that beat?!??!

MentIll Kase
10-20-2009, 01:44 AM
Listening...

The content was cool on this, the beat is alright... the tag fucks it up a little.. but damn, when the pattern comes in - it just makes it sound a whole lot better.. your delivery and flow is real good, lyrics is nice and just right for this beat, the chorus is ok... I don't like sample choruses too much when something else isn't added to it... like additional vocals, but it's still cool... Overall, pretty good track...I can vibe with this.

Keep it up'.