A Nobody - critique it, be brutal

[Nemesis]

this is something a little different. just some real honest shit. catches a lot of people off-guard at first. produced by my boy TAC back in Arkansas. let me know what you think of it overall as a song.

NobodyUnmastered.mp3 - 3.44MB (http://www.zshare.net/audio/50755397ae16bee9/)



http://www.zshare.net/audio/50755397ae16bee9/

also on my music page
http://www.myspace.com/jamaalakanemesis

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[Pen.]

Your vocals are a bit low, and your energy is a lil low for the beat, should be more clear and out there....Flow is cool, from what i can hear lyrics are good for what the track is, turn them vocals up a lil bit. Keep dropping.

[T-Roy Da Street]

thought your delivery was fine, agree with pen about the volume on the vocals though, was feelin the vibe of the track shit was cool, flow on time lyrics right there too nice drop

[llbeatsDOTcom]

i thought the vocal level was fine... im listening thru some JBL LSR monitors! Sounds good to me...Its a good soulful track... beat on point and i think u did good man!! I enjoyed it!! Flow on point... i thought the delivery was clean too

[JUICE.$$$$$.]

mannn u sound like this dude...kant think of his name...

but yo this shit is on point...love the beat so soulful...

good shit fam, im lookin foward to hear more from u.

[Nemesis]

i appreciate it ya'll. yeah i'm like my own engineer for real, so i'm aware the vocals aren't really loud, but i wanted as professional of a level as possible. i thought it was a good mix, but i'm gon' check it out in a few more systems and tweak it if necessary. i'll get some more shit up 4 yall soon.

thanks

[RenegadeOfTheStreetZ]

Like the vibe and feel of the track. Was feelin' the "head messed up" line in the 2nd verse! Delivering nice, quality pretty good from what I can tell... Like what you sayin' over the hook; it fits good. Only thing is i couldn't follow the flow that good, not saying it wasn't nice I just couldn't follow it sometimes, Don't get me wrong you do got flow tho! I'd definitly check more of your work out! Peace!