Dear Philly

[Jim B Dot]

Originally A Battle Song - Philly Vs. Camden

Dear Philly (http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7047994)

7047994

Feed: Original Sin & Dear Misses

[Jay 3rd]

love the guitar... vocals seem too low.. could be raised a bit.. in my opinion would sound better if u didnt db ya whole verse.. i like the hook sounds smooth.. verse is nice def feelin the lyrics.. good drop man keep em commin.. maybe try not to dub the whole verse and only certain words

[Pen.]

Vocals are a lil low, this beat is dope shit though, what beat is this?


Flow is cool, delivery is nice, some decent lines, just turn the vocals up a lil bit.

[RenegadeOfTheStreetZ]

Lol so you made a song out of what was originally a battle track? Interesting. I like your delivery. Overdubs are slightly off at some points. Flow is pretty good. Speakin' on real ish I see. The beat and vocals were both a little low to me. But overall I was feelin' it because it seems like you put some time into your lyrics. So while your lyrics, flow, and delivery were on point, to me it seems like you need to work on your quality. Also get those dubs in place! Toward the very end of the last verse they sounded alot more off than a few i herd at the beginning of the track. Other than that good track dude! Hope to hear more from ya! Peace.

[Instant Legend]

i like this, love the beat
hook is fire, aside from some adlibs that are off, im really diggin this, your voice is golden

tighten up a few technical aspect and this shit will burn


keep it movin

[Face.]

dope beat.. quality could be better.. doubles coulda been better.. nice emotion.. hard to hear some of ur lyrics w/ erratic doubles.. nice chorus.. 2nd verse - nice swag comin in.. good rhyme scheme.. breath control slips at some parts.. flow a lil sloppy at parts.. ur doubles fucked up half the track, coulda been a lot better..
7.7/10

[Jim B Dot]

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