BlackEyeCEO VS Penalifikz [Topical]

[Pen.]

2 Verses And A Hook.


Due in Three Days.


Topic Is Coming From Someone On Aim, Right Now.

Topic:
Leaving Behind.

[From leaving behind everything you knew and just pushing forward, to leaving behind your kid in the parking lot of a grocery store, to leaving a fat floater in the crapper after a long night out on the town with a hooker, flip it how you want]



Good Luck, Sir. :D

[Pen.]

Yeah, it's not due till tomorrow night :)

[TheBlackEyeCEO]

here's my rough just for the sake of being on time.....i'ma mix it better and hopefully post the better version tomorrow afternoon before you get back from work, if not, it's whatever run with it......

7056878
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7056878


when i think about the times i once had
I realize it wasn't all bad with
hallways all drab till i pressed the wrong button
feeling like my mind was just toastin inside of ovens
ghosting and i loved it, to virtually plummet
i really can't dumb it down, its one on none it's
mind against a million different shadows in the dark
it's wishing that it all would end, hopin it would start
with ropes all torn apart, like that ship has sailed
it's thinking of quitting while still heating up a hot rail
not scotsdale but every body has a pipe and a bag
still i'm not entailing why it wasn't all bad
the memories of friends and enemies, not knowing who's who
with something to write always, but nothing to do
of drifting on a dream, with no strings attached
mind being lifted while your lungs are attacked

HOOK
I've got to leave it all behind
the streets the hustle and grind
got to leave it all behind
i'm out there trying to get mine
i've got to leave it all behind
can't afford the repercussions
got to leave it all behind
it's all for me and mine


i was addicted to the need to steal
the normal life still lacks appeal
cuz i never had to talk to prove i'm real
bleeding still knew every word needed to close the deal
my problem was i never really wanted to think
so i often weathered heights that no man should see
so high my mind just deserted me, i'm sure this means
my grind is still alive, despite a rebirth and being
muzzled and blind, i'm still out there for mine
really trying to teach, before i'm grievin lost time
now it's all for the music, the mic's my lifeline
i don't understand why i gotta fall sometimes
i don't understand why they say that hiphop died
i gotta maintain to keep from falling out of the skies
realize i gain nothing when i'm lit and violent
and a child's laughter's golden when the streets are silent

shhh.....


Good Luck, Two VERY different styles of emcee, looking forward to seeing what the voters think.....

[Pen.]

Heres my rough too, lets just post finish up the polished product tomorrow by midnight :)

I gotta fix my doubles...and spit my hook :)

LeavingAllBehind_Rough_NoHook.mp3 - 1.74MB (http://www.zshare.net/audio/51307992dd844f8b/)

[Prod Deuce]

pens flow is tighter, xtras track sounds more like a complete song so far, pen needs a hooker and xtra needs the polish..holla..goodwork, but wats wit the rough copies you fuckin slackers.

[TheBlackEyeCEO]

lmfao, i was sick as a dawg and hungover to boot....i'ma try and redo right after i put up Ness's new site though.....

[Pen.]

Word, im recording my hook in a minute :)

and putting up the final, lol.

[RenegadeOfTheStreetZ]

I was diggin' both of the tracks, to be honest. I prolly shouldn't vote yet since Pen aint got his hook? lol... Hurry up

[Led Poison]

this was nice ya'll...ya both did ya'll thang....

[MentIll Kase]

Record the Hook, you slorebag!

[Pen.]

Lol..damn. I forgot all about this shit :)

[Pen.]

Closed, lol...My file isn't even there anymore