Twiztid motives

[P.ELLZ]

http://hiphopnetwork.net/forums/showthread.php?t=603
http://hiphopnetwork.net/forums/showthread.php?t=603


SAC IN THE BILLIN ALL DAY FUCK HOW U FEEL ABOUT IT
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[.Phantom.]

aight, beat not really my steez.

your remind me of this dude Smugz i know by your flow and voice. quality sounds cool, emotion is pretty much on point but delivery is slackin on me a bit. its a bit borin. it basically stays the same and doesnt change up too much.

hook- didnt even realize it was the hook until you repeated it. not really feelin the
hook too much

flow is cool. fell off maybe twice but nothing huge. lyrics are decent.

not really my style but ehh, it was a decent track man.

[Blackanese]

im not feeling the beat as well...just not my style of beat....ur flow and voice is cool....sometimes u were forcing some of ur rhymes which kinda fit but still sounded wierd...def could bump this in the whip tho cuz i bet it has beat...try doubling up ur hook or adding some kind of effect to it...it was hard to know if it was the hook or not just cause the beat was kinda plain....stay up man