Times Are Changing

[Brandon Cee]

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"Times Are Changing"

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[JøëL..]

listening right now, the hook was on point the melody was there..and the lyrics from the verses were nice i liked the imagery and the deepness inside..i felt this man..the beat was calm do..and deep as hell gave me chills a bit..its simple but it hits you.

nice material..

but tommors not promised today..so true.

keep at it fam.

[TheBlackEyeCEO]

good looks on using the sc embed for lazy people like myself.....beat is pretty simple but i like the way you approached it, deep heartfelt lyrics, good presence, haha hook matches the beat nicely....i'm feelin this a lot, we'll have to get up on a collab

[Dane Curley]

Lol, I thought you were tonedeff at first...

Your vocals are too low, I can barely hear you over the SNARE DRUM.. so thats an idea of how low. Flow sounds on, I liked how you chose to do the chorus. But again here on my speakers I can't hear that this is mixed well, and I can't make out too many of the lyrics. Could be the player... I know myspace always sullies my quality.

Only thing I wouldve done difference on the hook, is take more liberty with a singing voice. Kept that flow but changed up the pitch for more of a rise and fall.. sounds like a monotonous hook with no excitement being built up cause of the spoken style.

Not a bad track, fix whats wrong technically and I think the fundamentals of rap you got in pretty well. Enjoyed this listen.